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Thursday, July 3, 2008

My Novel

I'm working on a novel. It originally started out with just a JE (Journal Entry) in Mr. Madden's fifth hour Madwords class. If you were lucky enough to be in that class you may remember: "I woke up in my dark room, looked at my alarm clock that read 3:15 AM, and screamed."

After reading that aloud to the class he told us we had about five minutes to add to that. What I added to the rest of the paragraph was this: "Well, I thought I had screamed. My mother’s bedroom was inches into my eastern wall. If I had screamed she would have already burst into my room, panicking. She didn’t. I didn’t scream. I couldn’t scream. I just stared in astonishment at the figure that once stood in front of me."

That's not all I have so far. I have maybe two other pages. I don't know if I really like the details but I do like the storyline. My friend Becca (a.k.a. Bella) is helping with ideas and revising. (Bella, I'll be sure to mention you first in the "Acknowledgments"!)

So just leave me a comment of what you think and if you like it then I'll post up more of it!

(Also, if you were wondering about the picture at the top of the post, I took that. So please comment on what you think about that, too!)

Thursday, May 29, 2008

Unnecassary Chairs vs. Potholes

Alright, I was on my way back from church last sunday, and on the side of the road were two benches and an empty trash can- in the middle of the freeway. There were numerouse amounts of them on the side of the road. That same day I went to hang out with my dad, and on almost every street we turned onto, was covered with potholes! What doesn't make sense to me is the government decides to spend our taxes on nice little places where no one is going to sit and trash cans that no one is going to use while on that road and many other streets are filled with big, deep potholes. What do you think of the whole situation?

Sunday, May 25, 2008

Beginning post!

Hello! How is everyone? Good? Good! Well welcome to my blog! So this is my blog and you are more than welcome to leave comments on all my posts about what you think. My first topic that I want to talk about is: What the Government is Doing with Our Taxes What do you think about it? Give me some comments!